Bcf help me write the most difficult letter ive ever had to.

Azonicben · Could Be A Chat Bot Joined: 22 Aug 2007 Karma :

Hello all.

I`m not the greatest letter-ist on this planet. My mum passed away last week and im trying to write a letter to send out to everyone informing them of mums death and all the funeral arrangements Crying or Very sad

After about an hour of staring at a blank page ive come up with the following

any suggestions welcomed

Thanks

Annabella · Like a person, only smaller Joined: 03 Feb 2002 Karma :

I think it's perfect. Smile

I'm so sorry to hear you've lost your Mum *hugs*
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Kwaks · I'm not a fast rider Joined: 28 Jan 2006 Karma :

Nothing will improve on your own words Karma

Stay strong for your dad, he will need you just now Thumbs Up

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Howling TerrorOutOfOffice · Super Spammer Joined: 05 Dec 2008 Karma :

Well said kwaker6r

Keep yer chin up Ben.

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Azonicben · Could Be A Chat Bot Joined: 22 Aug 2007 Karma :

Cheers guys,
I`ve pretty much sorted it now, all formatted and the like, thanks for the advice and kind words. I`ve been thinking about it and your all right. It doesnt matter how its written its what it says that counts Thumbs Up

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chris-red · Have you considered a TDM? Joined: 21 Sep 2005 Karma :

Looks great mate Thumbs Up

Genuinely sorry for your loss.
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Fisty · Super Spammer Joined: 11 Apr 2007 Karma :

Ben mate sorry to hear about your loss. The letter is perfect, get your ass out for a good ride. It helps clera the mind x
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Clanger · Stirrer Joined: 27 May 2004 Karma :

The letter looks totally fine to me, and very sorry for your loss.
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MarJay · But it's British! Joined: 15 Sep 2003 Karma :

Its right I think. I *might* change the first instance of the word 'dad' for the word 'Father' and then after that first sentence go a little more informal though.

You've done a very good job of a very very difficult task. I feel for you. Sad

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TUG · World Chat Champion Joined: 12 May 2007 Karma :

Its hard losing a parent, If you ever need someone to talk to whos actually been there an know it is, drop me a line.
Keep in their, time is the best healer. Thumbs Up

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teech · Scooby Slapper Joined: 28 Oct 2006 Karma :

I think that letter is just right.

I lost my mum just over a year ago in similar circumstances, so, like some others here, I know exactly what you are going through.

Try to take it all one thing a time, you will get through it. You and I both know that the coming months will be hard. Never be afraid to share how you are feeling as many times as you need to. Don't bottle it up because that way madness lies (learnt much to my own cost).

You have my deepest sympathies mate.
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Fortuna · World Chat Champion Joined: 29 Oct 2004 Karma :

After my mum died I found easiest to just say what I thought.
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Wilson123 · Nearly there... Joined: 19 Jun 2009 Karma :

I'm sorry for your loss
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Jenks · World Chat Champion Joined: 22 May 2006 Karma :

aww ben, sosorry to hear whats happened. you know where i am pal.
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The Artist · Super Spammer Joined: 06 Jan 2008 Karma :

Most of the important words seemed to be replaced with stars. I hope you have sorted it apart from that.

Sorry you lost your mum, no idea how I would cope if I lost someone that close.