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CaNsA
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PostPosted: 10:47 - 25 Aug 2017    Post subject: The Story for Half-Life 3 has been released. Reply with quote
https://github.com/Jackathan/MarcLaidlaw-Epistle3/blob/master/Epistle3_Corrected.md
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PostPosted: 12:20 - 25 Aug 2017    Post subject: Reply with quote
tl;dr - needs more Alyx ascii art.
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PostPosted: 17:53 - 25 Aug 2017    Post subject: Reply with quote
Riddled with typos and inconsistencies, not least of which is referring to the Borealis as a "sub" at one point. It reads more like fanfiction using flowery language to add to its credibility.

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Our peers at Aperture Science were at work on a project of some promise, but in their rush to beat Black Mesa for funding, they must have compromised ordinary standards of risk. We heard their research vessel had simply disappeared. Vanished with all hands... even part of the dry dock!


This suggests it happened well before the Combine Invasion, not during. If it had, the rest of the world would have been too busy being invaded to notice one ship in a secret dry dock disappearing.

No mention of any accompanying force was made at the end of Episode 2 (which ended moments before Alyx and Gordon would have boarded their own helicopter)

Alyx killing Mossman makes little sense, especially as she knew her father had forgiven/not blamed her for her actions while serving as a double agent.
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