New band artwork

[Moonie]

Just got the new artwork through for my band, payed £40 and am chuffed with it. What do people think?

https://i40.tinypic.com/j7u444.jpg
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[PsychoHippy]

The picture is good (although maybe a little busy), but the text is hard to read at a glance.

For £40 I'd say it was money well spent though, as long as you aren't a 4 piece boy band with no musical talent what so ever, in which case I'd get my money back
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[Dr. DaveJPS]

i agree the text is too unreadable at a glance ( all it really needs is the tounge/leaf things removing.)
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[mistergixer]

Is your band called 'Panzer Flan'?
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[Carl_steveo]

Is your band called Tanzler Plan.
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[Clanger]

Artwork is very 'White Zombie' esque. Can't read the name of the band though...so you need to go back and get this amended.
Get the text set so it's more prominent...use something a little stronger than yellow, or even shadow in black to make it stand out.
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[Moonie]

It's Tanzler's Plan

Also, I know what people are saying about the clarity of the writing, but seriously, for a metal logo it's clear. Have a go at guessing some of these:

https://s7.photobucket.com/albums/y265/tramptech32/AOTEnewtop/layoutaote_01.gif

https://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/128/l_ceea2953abe2401783ea05aad5dbcacc.jpg

https://cain1.com/_cattlespace/header_09.jpg
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[KevTM]

Apparitions of (Enita) -- no sure about the alst word

Job For A Cowboy

Cattle Decapitation.

oh, btw, I could read yours no problem, the Z needed a second glance but that was it.

[Moonie]

Well done, but it was Apparitions of the End.

Some more for you haha:
https://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m299/CAIN-1/CMFflyer.jpg
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[Phoenix]

Looks like the title screen to some 8-bit puzzle game.

[Moonie]

[ttr]

That's fooking sweet, reminds me of a 'waste cover.
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