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risingsun
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PostPosted: 19:01 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Just to say hi Reply with quote

Hi all, just wanted to introduce myself. New to the forum, and just wanted to say hi Wink

Also looking to see if any of you bikers out there could give a bit of feedback on my new website ie. easy reading/good layout/content etc. Would be good to know from the people that count.

Plus, if any of you know of any other interesting sites that might be relevant, let me know and I'll put a link on (forum's on already!)

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PostPosted: 19:43 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Re: Just to say hi Reply with quote

Thoughts on your site:

The ticker at the top is annoying.

The bookmark this site link is wrong and I'm not sure anyone actually clicks them anyway? - looks amateurish in my opinion.

The red on grey text is slightly hard to read on my monitor.
Similarly the 'logo' has to be looked at to work out what it's saying.

I click 'used and new leathers' and I expect to be able to buy from there, rather than going to another page.

The pictures would look better if not taken on a driveway.

Would be nice to have a seperate page for each item you can 'buy' with more details clearly laid out.

In my opinion, Focused Events are a bit cack.

Your links in the links page aren't obviously links.

The animated icons next to the menus are distracting, annoying and don't seem to be relevant.

Erm, I could go on...
I should warn you, by profession I'm a software tester, so I'm paid to pick holes in things Smile.
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PostPosted: 19:44 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Welcome to the site! Very Happy
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risingsun
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PostPosted: 19:51 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Re: Just to say hi Reply with quote

G wrote:
Thoughts on your site:

The bookmark this site link is wrong and I'm not sure anyone actually clicks them anyway? - looks amateurish in my opinion.

I click 'used and new leathers' and I expect to be able to buy from there, rather than going to another page.

Would be nice to have a seperate page for each item you can 'buy' with more details clearly laid out.

Your links in the links page aren't obviously links.

Erm, I could go on...
I should warn you, by profession I'm a software tester, so I'm paid to pick holes in things Smile.



Thanks G, fair points. Tend to agree with you about the 'buying' page, I'll be revising that.

Just a couple of things I wanted to ask - what do you mean the bookmark site link is 'wrong' and link pages aren't obviously links?

Thoughts appreciated Smile
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risingsun
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PostPosted: 19:54 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

cokker wrote:
Welcome to the site! Very Happy


Thanks Wink
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G
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PostPosted: 20:04 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Re: Just to say hi Reply with quote

Click on 'BOOKMARK THIS SITE! '

Your links just look like black text, as you have taken off other styling. Need something to say 'click on me', such as a different colour, button, underline, etc.
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risingsun
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PostPosted: 20:14 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Re: Just to say hi Reply with quote

G wrote:
Click on 'BOOKMARK THIS SITE! '

Your links just look like black text, as you have taken off other styling. Need something to say 'click on me', such as a different colour, button, underline, etc.


The bookmark link works on my PC at home and at work Question

I get what you mean about the links but surely anyone with a bit of sense would hover their cursor around the text, and then see the hand icon which would enable them to access the link by clicking it.

URLs are blue and underlined by default I know, but I haven't listed the URL, I've created a link... so surely people will realise that that's what they click on...? Very Happy
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PostPosted: 20:31 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi there, welcome to the forum Thumbs Up

Feedback on the site:

>> The scrolling banner is so 90's Wink

>> Get rid of the google search bar, if i want to search google i go to google.

>> In agreement with G about the links, I realise its common sense to click on the writing but a small button next to each bit of writing looks more professional.

>> I like the writing style of Rising sun

>> Gallery looks good

>> Get rid of the spinning discs next to the side navigation, (in my opinion) anything moving takes your attention away from the rest of the screen. Maybe do a rollover button in place of the standard writing?

>> The page rank thing looks a little last minute

All in all not bad, some bits look good (Gallery) and then some look naff (IMO)

Good luck with it, Thumbs Up
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MarJay
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PostPosted: 20:55 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Re: Just to say hi Reply with quote

risingsun wrote:
Hi all, just wanted to introduce myself. New to the forum, and just wanted to say hi Wink

Also looking to see if any of you bikers out there could give a bit of feedback on my new website ie. easy reading/good layout/content etc. Would be good to know from the people that count.

Plus, if any of you know of any other interesting sites that might be relevant, let me know and I'll put a link on (forum's on already!)

Cheers


The colours are all wrong, can't put my finger on it but they hurt my eyes.

The scrolling banner thing isn't completely visible, the bottom of all the letters is cut off.

The rotating icon next to the menu is REALLY annoying.

Thing is, it may work on your computer at home and at work, but you have to bear in mind that lots of people use different browsers and resolutions, so it won't always work.

The front page is a bit too 'wordy'. The colours you have chosen look like the 'darkened room' colours we use at work on our systems. Apart from the red which is really high contrast... that might be the bit that is hurting my eyes!

We use the brown (like your background) black text (not bold) and a blue logo. No other colours are allowed. Too many colours is confusing to the eye IMO.

After all that, welcome to BCF! Wink
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PostPosted: 21:10 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just to show that some things are personal taste.....

I like the colour scheme, it didn't hurt my eyes. What did though, was the main logo at the top. These days a lot of people have large monitors, as mine is, and I felt I had to sit back slightly to take it in. The 'font' is fine, I quite liked it, and it sums up what you are focusing on.

Watch out for the spelling, 'perfect' has an 'f' in it...

It does look home made, but that fits with your profile anyway, unless you want to attract a different type of client/customer/punter.

Other than that, I'd agree with previous comments, but none of these would put me off visiting your site again.

An excellent starting point on which to build your future success!
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PostPosted: 23:42 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

https://validator.w3.org/check?uri=www.risingsunmotorcycles.com

Your site failed validation with 240 errors.
To me, validation is always the mark of a good site, although I appreciate that not everyone is able to write their own code.

It doesn't look too bad in Firefox at 1024x768 (shush, I know Sad), though. Simple layout and neutral colours are always going to win. Certainly it's not the sort of design that makes alarm bells go off from a consumer's point of view.
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PostPosted: 23:46 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naah it is the red, but its the red glowy thing on the banner, and the red on black (never a good combo) on the secondary banner thing.

Change the black to another colour (the brown maybe) and you'll be right. Oh and my advice would also be to tone down the glowy thing on the title banner. If its supposed to be a rising sun, then would be better as a rising sun flag rather than a glowing ruby.
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PostPosted: 23:49 - 09 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, and there are road legal simpson helmets available, its just you don't sell 'em! Wink
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PostPosted: 00:30 - 10 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for all your comments guys, and for your time.

I think it was MarJay that pointed out, we all use different browsers and have different screen resolutions so we're all seeing different things at the end of the day.

I'll be looking into making a few aesthetically pleasing changes very shortly Wink
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PostPosted: 00:49 - 10 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

risingsun wrote:

I think it was MarJay that pointed out, we all use different browsers and have different screen resolutions so we're all seeing different things at the end of the day.

Indeed, it's definitely worth trying a few different monitors and definitely try and get a few browsers installed to try it out in different ones. Yours punters will use all sorts and you need to get the best compromise for everyone.
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PostPosted: 01:25 - 10 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

Couldn't agree more Very Happy
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PostPosted: 10:40 - 10 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

looks fine on my 19" lcd jobby at 1024.

only thing is those spinning red circles.

good job Thumbs Up
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PostPosted: 15:50 - 13 Mar 2007    Post subject: Reply with quote

risingsun wrote:

I think it was MarJay that pointed out, we all use different browsers and have different screen resolutions so we're all seeing different things at the end of the day.

That's why it should be w3c valid. Smile
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