Give me some critique on these tips videos please.

[Amber Phoenix]

So, I recently picked up a RoadHawk camera, primarily for insurance purposes, but of course with all that footage from commuting into central London everyday, I just had to do something with it.

Not wanting to go down the usual route of a long ride out video with some obligatory rock music in the background, I thought I have a bash at producing something genuinely useful. So I've been putting together a number of short ~ 30sec clips highlighting a situation that is about to unfold, the idea being you use your superior biker skills to anticipate what's about to happen. If you predict correctly - top stuff, if not - maybe learn from it, maybe it'll stop you ploughing into a sticky situation when on the road.

Anyway, just done a handful to begin with. Would love some feedback, let me know what you reckon, anything you think to improve them.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCuKLt7xHmz8DupLURkvcX-A

Thanks!
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[Whosthedaddy]

Not bad.

Typical sort of stuff seen on a daily basis.
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[Amber Phoenix]

[BTTD]

Okay, I watched 2, 3 and 4.

I'm not watching another one.
Maybe I've been numbed by spastastic Russian car crashes, but these happenings are (for me) total non-events and really obvious.

If it's going to be that dull, try livening it up, for example ORCA GT:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUHAb4kuzBA
Not amazing, but infinitely more watchable.

[Az]

Something similar already exists

https://www.youtube.com/user/RoadcraftNottingham/search?query=what+happens+next

[FriendlyEllis]

With all this filtering past waiting cars at junctions and in between active ambulances and turning cars ?

What happens next?
1. You hit the emergency services as they load/unload an ambulance?
3. You filter up the outside off a really congested junction and get caught out by the turning car that didn't see you?
5. You filter again at a pretty congested but moving set of junctions and are then lucky the black BMW was only over taking because if it had turned right you'd have got knocked off?

What about using the usual senses before the 6th one? 😨😨
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