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rrajan
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Joined: 11 Nov 2005
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PostPosted: 02:27 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Motorcycle History Reply with quote
Hi Guys

This is Ramesh from California. I am an Avid Motorcycle Rider and a motorcycle researcher. I own Yamaha YD-350 , Honda Rebel and in negotiations to buy a vintage Indian Chiefs.

I am publishing my research for the online community about the history of motorcycles and want to start my own motorcycle museum in the future.

Who Invented Motorcycle
Honda Motorcycle History
BMW Motorcycle history
Kawasaki Motorcycle History
Indian Motorcycle History
Kawasaki Motorcycle History
Yamaha Motorcycle History
Harley Davidson Motorcycle History
Life of Soichiro Honda
Life of Gottlieb Diamler -Inventor of first Motorcycle
Life of Max Friz
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iCraig
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PostPosted: 07:34 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
Quite a good site, but there are alot of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors!

Plus I was quite shocked, to see on the Honda page, that you even fail to mention the CB750 Sandcast.

Its probably the bike that set the world alight and killed the british bike industry!
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ZRX61
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PostPosted: 16:04 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
I tried to read the Kawasaki part but it's basically unreadable. I barely made it to the end of the first paragraph.. Thumbs Down
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iCraig
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PostPosted: 16:09 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
Gotta agree with you there ZRX61, the site is full of tosh.

Seems like he copied and pasted Kawasaki Motorcycle History over and over again.

Some of the paragraphs don't make sense either.
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lilredmachine
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PostPosted: 16:10 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
Is rrajan's real name Yoda?
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TL666
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PostPosted: 16:40 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
That site is very, very strange
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MarJay
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PostPosted: 16:53 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
Not wanting to be rude, but to quote from pulp fiction:

Jules Winfield wrote:
English motherfucker, Do you speak it?


You need to get someone to rewrite the text into readable prose rather than a jumble of words and the word "Motorcycle".

Also, where is Triumph in there? or any British bike? or Ducati?

rrajan wrote:
Kawasaki motorcycle history started with their first motorcycle in the 1960 which is a 125cc two stroke kawasaki motorcycle. Kawasaki motorcycle history was not all alone with kawasaki. Kawasaki motorcycle history started their high end powerful rigs by acquiring meguro motorcycles which was oldest motorcycle company in japan.


That doesn't make any sense. It should read:

MarJay wrote:
The motorcycle subsidiary of Kawasaki Heavy Industries started in 1960 with a 125cc two-stroke. They entered the big bike market after aquiring Meguro Motorcycles, the oldest Motorcycle manufacturer in Japan.


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Jack_Cheese
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PostPosted: 17:02 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
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Teaman
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PostPosted: 21:05 - 11 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
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rrajan
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PostPosted: 15:04 - 12 Nov 2005    Post subject: It was never meant to spam Reply with quote
hi guys,

It was never meant to be spam as you see here. Pls give me your good suggestions to update the site.

No need for word of appreciations but certainly not brickbats. I can take some good things from here that my current copywriter is doing a bad job. I will get some one new to rewrite the articles. Also thanks for whoever gave me good suggestions.
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Claud 14.7 to 1
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PostPosted: 15:23 - 12 Nov 2005    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yeah. Get an English-speaking national to have a read though and correct the grammar & sentence structure. Preferably someone who can read and write English well. Smile

For the best results it would be best to work with the person and explain what you are trying to say in some sentences.

Good luck
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